My introduction
Journal Entry: Mon May 28, 2007, 11:34 AM
I haven't been around for a while, so this seems like a good time for an introduction.
Hi! I'm Seán. I'm young, and I'm from Ireland. I write a little poetry, but not very often. I haven't been around for long enough to know much about much, or even to be an astute observer. Still, practice is good, in preparation for when I have.
I also write children's stories. Here I feel I might know something, having been practicing as a gasúr for nearly 23 years now. I hope to put some stuff up soon. I'm also interested in music (I play the piano and I sing and I write songs and I really struggle to write lyrics that are at all decent for them) and the Irish language and, well, everything else.
Feel free to comment on anything. I don't comment much, so I don't expect to get many comments. There's just always so much to do! So that's ok.
Pleased to meet you!
(Please introduce yourself)
Seán
- Mood:
Thanks
Devious Comments
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a-poem-a-day
my artwork
thank you also for something wonderful to read, keep doing that it may help me get going again.
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this is no more
You seem to like criticizing - by which I mean suggesting improvements. Have you any suggestions for the thing in the journal, that it might be good enough to submit as a deviation?
I gave up on this verse, I couldn't think of a good way to say it
"A twitch, and it's up to me
To follow your lead
Hard to sort
Your thoughts from mine
Do I recognise where I am?
Far yet to go"
And I'm not sure I'm comfortable with the line
"Your vapours bathe us, carry us downstream"
The rest I can live with.
Comment?
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I'm one of your talking wounded.
[link] - Wilt N Flowers; poet, novelist and all-round genius. Enlightened and at your service.
[link] - the guide to good commenting.
For once, the weather seems to know it here.
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